Writing

ANZAC Day poem

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Under the sea

Under the sea, under the sea. Under the sea is my science presentation title. You’re probably asking why I chose the title under the sea. Well I chose it because my text was about what the ground is like at the bottom of the ocean

The science expo is when all of the year 5 classes in the school search about one main topic then write an explanation text about it. We did it so we understand a bit more about a living and breathing objects or non-living and breathing objects. All of this was presented on Wednesday the 7th of September in our year 5 classrooms.

My highlight was all of my finished and ready to show the visitors on the Tuesday. My lowlight making my model because it was hard to make it out of concrete so it was all running and it was hard to make volcanoes and trenches because it was a seabed. Next time I think I should do the model a bit earlier than I did but I think my time that I put in it went really well.

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Press this picture and one of the websites I used will come up in a new page

This is my model

This is my model

To me

Dear Future/older self Mikaylah,

As you probably know we had a student led conference, if you remember. I need to tell you, you need to look back at this but you will know if you’re looking back at this because your looking at it. Clear, okay. At my presentation I shared my proudest pieces or something I thought I had improved in. The presentation was presented in front of our year 5 teachers and Mum.

You would think the same thing because your me, so you would agree with me. I thought I did really well with.
Maths-explaining a page in my book and showing Mum the published piece.
Literacy-telling a very short side of my writers notebook piece and the story.
Inquiry-explaining what a thinkers key was.
If you don’t agree with me then you’re not me.

I know we’re amazing but there’s still things that silly us didn’t do that we need to improve in.
Stumbling on words.
Making sure I have everything out.
They’re the only thing cause we’re super.

From past/younger self Mikaylah.

No yawning here this is my yarn


These past few weeks we have been writing a yarn about our Australian endeavours character. Here is my yarn in writing.

“Not only was I looking after my kids, I also had to look after the store my own store. Eliza Perrin is my name, the other day I started running my own store. Yes a women running a store in the gold rush. I didn’t know what to expect I thought that it was going to go down in the dump straight away. But seeing people walk in and out made it a blast of fun but it was quite weird. Most people sounded a bit different, I saw people from different country’s, lots of the diggers though. But the good thing about the store is lots of diggers came lots of them, I had a sense I was going to make a load of it but that’s just a childish dream. But even if I was or wasn’t I was as bright as the sunshine, especially when the doors first opened.”

I didn’t know that chess was that old!

If it goes to fast then just pause it.

Practise my persuasive piece

What have I done in persuasive writing? Well we have been doing persuasive writing.
Persuasive writing is quite hard and I thought it was easy but I was wrong! I never new that you would normally put your strongest opinion first.
Practise makes perfect but mines not perfect because my sizzling start is not as good as it can be.

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